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Example
• Problem with: the brochure sample
• Company name: 1 Hotel Chains
• Letters of the 2 should be bigger.
• The information of the 3 should be removed.
• Change the description under the top photo to 4
• Use the picture with the 5 of the hotel.
• The 6 should be in red print.
• Translate into 7
• Deadline: by the end of 8
• Address: No. 9 Green Drive, 9 , NY21300
• Telephone number: 10

Penguins in Africa
Appearance and lifestyle They are also called Jackass Penguins for the sound they make. The 31 of their body remains constant. They restrict their 32 on land from dusk till dawn. They cannot fly because they have heavy 33 They nest under 34 They eat tree 35 Predators • seals • 36 • seagulls (eat the penguin 37 ) Threats They lose 38 in winter. They are fighting for nesting 39 and food because of human activities In order to improve survivorship, it is helpful to increase the 40 of their genes.